Original Romeo and Juliet
Paris enters the scene followed by a Paige who is bearing a flower and a torch. Paris tells his Page to keep watch for other people. The page exits then whistles letting Paris know someone is approaching. Paris hides and sees Romeo and Balthasar enter the scene. Romeo tells Balthasar to leave, Balthasar pretends to obey but hides. When Balthasar is gone Romeo enters the tomb.Paris who has been watching from hiding thinks that Romeo intends to desecrate the tomb and moves to stop him. Romeo tries to tell Paris that he has no intention of descrating the tomb but Paris does not believe him and the two fight. Romeo kills Paris who in his dying breath requests to be laid next to Juliet. Romeo agrees and lays Paris's body next to Juliets.
After laying Paris's body next to Juliet's Romeo takes the poison he bought from the apothecary and dies. Friar Laurence arrives and meets Balthasar who tells the friar that Romeo has gone into the tomb. Friar Laurence enters the tomb and finds Romeo dead. Soon afterward Juliet awakens and finds Romeo dead. Destroyed Juliet tells the friar to leave. Juliet tries first to drink the poison, when she finds it empty she tries to kiss Romeo's lips to poison herself. When this does not work Juliet stabs herself in the heart and dies.
Shortly after her suicide a watchman arrives having been alerted by Paris's Page. Once the watchman arrives, the Prince, Lord and Lady Capulet, the Nurse, Lord Montague and others arrive and find the bodies of Romeo, Juliet, and Paris. Eventually Friar Laurence arrives and explains everything. The Prince then fines both the houses and tells everyone that the death of Romeo and Juliet should be a lesson to all that peace has brought to heavy of a price.
Revised Romeo and Juliet
Paris enters the tomb while the Paige is hiding outside to
signal him if there is someone coming. After a few minutes the Paige whistles
and Paris hid at the dark so that he can’t be seen by that someone. He was
shocked when he saw that Romeo, a montague was there so he immediately went out
of the dark because he thought that Romeo will do something to Juliet. When Romeo
saw Paris he was also shocked because Paris got his sword out and wanted to
fight with him. That’s why Romeo protecting himself fights back that’s why
Paris was killed. After that fight, he immediately went beside Juliet and cried
a lot seeing the dead body of his beloved love. At first, he thinks of ending
his life by drinking the potion he bought but it was lost when he was fighting
with Paris and there is no light in the tomb because the torch lost its light. Because
of crying a lot he fell asleep beside Juliet. After a few hours, Juliet wakes
up and she was very happy seeing Romeo beside her. She uses her hair to tickles
Romeo in his ear, Romeo wakes up and he was shocked that Juliet is alive; he
first thought that it was just a dream. But, Juliet explained everything about
the plan.
When they were about to went out of the tomb they saw Friar
Lawrence coming. Friar Lawrence was very happy seeing Romeo and Juliet alive.
The next morning, Romeo and Juliet decided to go to Capulet to tell him about
them. The Lady Capulet and Capulet were shocked seeing Juliet alive. Juliet explained
everything and the Lady Capulet and Capulet realized that they should end up
their feud with the Montagues because they don’t want Juliet to be lost in
their life again. Romeo and Juliet do the same thing with the Montagues.
Because of the couple the two families realized to end up the feud between them
and to live peacefully.
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